Upon reading the first version of my retelling of Jesus' walking on water, R.I. insisted that I just couldn't leave out the wildflowers that fill every field in Galilee in springtime (that's one of the things I went back and fixed, as best I could).
Then he sent me these arguments (a picture is worth, etc.) to back up his point.


I don't think even the revised version does the wildflowers justice.
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